Poetry "Alone"

seems like every one is worried ...

about someone else..

Seems like people always in a hurry...

to another's soul ...




I keep my silly worries, all to my self
Breaking insides no worry
to anybody else..

So Alone is where i lye..
slowly waiting to die
speaking pages all inside my head
Writing eulogys.... but im not dead

And i boxed up old memorys
they only try to break me
Times when i was healthy
now all i do is cry.
Yeah i Feel like a child

I keep my silly worries, all to my self
This pain i keep inside,
well i'll never share with any one else

These visions make me blind
How am i supposed to complete this climb..
Lost inside my mind,
Yeah im not fine

Yeah seems like some one oughta worry....

For too long, ill be gone..

Then friends and family surely...

Will think they did something wrong?....

Funny. I've just about finished a little poem that I was thinking of titling "Alone," too. Luckily, yours is different. And longer.

I like it. Nice work.

Tiercel said:

Funny. I've just about finished a little poem that I was thinking of titling "Alone," too. Luckily, yours is different. And longer.

I like it. Nice work.

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cool are you going to post it? I like hearing other peoples poetry

I have one more line to get right. I'm happy enough with the other 19 short lines. So if I stop putzing around here and finish that last line, I might post it tonight.