New Poem: ! I Need To Forget"

joshueg · Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 6:52 pm Post subject: New Poem: ! I Need To Forget"

" i need to forget"

or i' ll won' t be free

and look straight ahead

believing in me.

i need to forgive

what you did to me

for time has gone by

and i need to live!

my heart' s not forgotten

since i hear it cry

recalling how rotten

are your soul and your mind.

i am wanting to cry

to release all my pains,

but i' m deeply afraid

of never stop crying.

all i wanted before

was your being alone

but i am learning now

that that feeling was wrong.

i cannot change the past,

i cannot change your mind,

but my future can change

and it ' s me who decides!! Rolling Eyes

Starry · Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 8:18 pm Post subject:

Another great one from you Joshueg. Very Happy

Good to end on a positive after going down within the earlier verses. Very Happy

Keep writing. Very Happy

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Starry · Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 9:18 pm Post subject:

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joshueg · Posted: Thu Jul 05, 2007 2:04 pm Post subject:

Riptor, expressing your feeling in a poem has nothing to do with one' s masculinity. Nothing to do at all!