some of my rhymes

den1 · Newbie User Joined: Dec 25, 2006 Posts: 88

I'M SICK OF SPENDING MY DAYS IN A FOG FILLED DAZE

I SIT CONTENT AND PLANE AS I WATCH MY DREAMS OF FAME DRIFTING AWAY.

I NEED A LITTLE BIT OF GUIDENCE, BECAUSE IT FEELS STRANGE WITH NO ALARM BELLS OR SIRENS

I FEEL COMFORTABLE IN THE SILENCE, BUT A SIT UP STRAIGHT WHEN THE SPIRITUALNESS BECOMES SCIENCE.

AM I THE ONLY ONE?

I'VE BEEN LEFT BEHIND AND EVERYONE'S GONE.

I TRY TO STAY FULL ON AND FULL BLOWN

BUT IN THE END WE WERE BORN ALONE AND WE DIE ALONE.

WHAT'S A HOUSE, KIDS AND WIFE?

WHAT'S ACCEPTABLE?, WHATS NASTY?, WHATS NICE?

WHATS MANNERS WHEN YOUR STABBING PEOPLES BACKS WITH A KNIFE?

I FEEL I'VE BEEN VIOLATED BUT THE ANGER HAS WORN.

WE'VE ALL BEEN BRAINWASHED SINCE THE DAYS WE WERE BORN.

WHAT'S WRIGHT AND WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG!?

WHAT'S RAGS? AND WHAT'S WEALTH?

WHY THE FUCK AM I SAT HERE WITH A PEN TALKING TO MYSELF!

WAS THE THE PAST REAL OR WAS IT FAKE?

SHIT I'M DOING MY OWN HEAD IN NOW I SHOULDN'T HAVE DRANK THE WHOLE CRATE.

THEN AGAIN WHY DO I FEEL THE NEED TO GET BAKED?

AWW FUCK IT I'M GONNA PUT ON MY SKATES AND GO AND THINK BY THE LAKE.

ikemikes15 · Newbie User Joined: Nov 23, 2006 Posts: 20

nice man, definitly can relate, keep it up

Sacrament · Expert User Joined: Aug 15, 2006 Posts: 501

Terrible.

den1 · Newbie User Joined: Dec 25, 2006 Posts: 88

Sacrament · Expert User Joined: Aug 15, 2006 Posts: 501

I don't rhyme because I know that I wouldn't do a very good job at it. I do write poetry, though.

den1 · Newbie User Joined: Dec 25, 2006 Posts: 88

Ok cool.

I write rhymes just for fun and enjoy doing it at the same time.

Thought you must have known what your talking about to make such a statement?