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The-Widowmaker
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 5:07 pm    Post subject: Kinetik has Cancer Reply with quote

Kinetik has brain cancer, and his bitch is a pole dancer
She put her lips around my pole I spunk on her she choked with laughter
Kinetik has testicular tumours - it's just a rumour
But I hope to earth its true because his death cannot come any sooner
Why does he have so much cancer, I really do not know
But faggots like Kinetik suck dick, and drink the sticky snow
If he had balls, he would face me on the street
But he wont, because the pussy will get sliced up into butchers meat

Kinetik has Cancer.
Lets hope he dies of it soon.

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 6:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

What a frenetic poem! Why it is not removed, as well as the Wedding Carnage's avatar and signature?

But I will get the occasion and ask about grammar-semantic aspects. I learn English still, and most of text I understood, but not whole one. So I will ask some questions here, and I will be happy to get answers from anybody who will want to give them.

1. I spunk on her - I do not understand. What does it mean?
Is it related to "spank" verb? Question

2. she choked with laughter - I do not understand. Question

3. But I hope to earth its true - Is it an idiom? I do not understand, what earth? Why "to earth"? No apostroph is an error I guess.
Question

4. But he wont, because the pussy will get sliced up into butchers meat - What does it mean? What is "pussy"? Question

5. Lets hope he dies of it soon. - Why Present Simple here? If I wrote other tense (example - Future Simple), it will be error? Question

Kinetik, do not bother yourself with this scary poem, it is only a frenetic joke of probably Wedding Carnage (he has an awful, putrid corpse avatar aswell Shocked )! Very frenetic, but only. Exclamation

It is strange that mods did not remove it. But I would like to know about that grammar-semantic aspects soon. Thank you.

good bye

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 12:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh, children.

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 4:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 5:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Your poem sounds to me like somethin from the East CoasT/West CoasT gangsta rap days. Haha some of the things you say in it make me think you're either a crazy kid or a fucked up old man. WeirdO!

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 4:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

SilentType wrote:
Your poem sounds to me like somethin from the East CoasT/West CoasT gangsta rap days.


It is interesting somewhat. I do not see the coherence what is "the East CoasT/West CoasT gangsta rap".

Any grammar/language opinions?

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 7:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

inglish lengwidge shud bi rifrmd!

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 5:42 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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She put her lips around my pole I spunk on her she choked with laughter


She probably laughed because it was so so tiny....loser...get lost Twisted Evil

Get a hobby for godsake...you're more annoying than me


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PostPosted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 6:41 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Haha, it was exquisite, Emma! Laughing Laughing Laughing


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PostPosted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 6:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I saw I can not delete my old posts. Is it normal?? Oh, deer! Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil


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