Poem I wrote, when remembering my last school.

W1CKEDJO

All those years of hurt and blame
And tears that fell like pouring rain.
Words that cut like razor-blades.
Soul, black as the ace of spades.

You think that after all these years
I might forget and dry those tears.
Those memories, I can't forget.
So many things that I regret.

Perhaps I should have been a bi*ch
Like all the rest that liked to snitch.
But instead, I was too nice.
And for that, I payed a price.

People sneered and picked on me.
I put it down to jealousy.
I was smart, but they were sly.
Those bullies made me want to die.

And when I told my "friends", they said,
That it was all inside my head.
They wondered why I was depressed,
And moaned at me for being stressed.

Perhaps next time, you'll understand
That victims need a helping hand.
And if you all refuse to see,
Then don't expect f*ck-all from me!

Vulvectomy · Intermediate User Joined: Dec 12, 2007 Posts: 102

Ever write positive material? I like your style, but the negativity is overbearing!

W1CKEDJO · Posted: Sun Dec 23, 2007 5:57 am Post subject:

I tend to write better when I'm ranting about something. I'm more creative when in a negative state of mind...

I am positive in person. But when I'm alone, all these memories and negative thoughts come back. It's made me an insomniac, as well.

Sacrament · Advanced User Joined: Aug 15, 2006 Posts: 464

Terrible.

W1CKEDJO · Posted: Sun Dec 23, 2007 6:04 am Post subject:

Yes, actually. And I hope you don't have to go through it. (Then again, perhaps you should. Then you might not be so smug.)

Sacrament · Advanced User Joined: Aug 15, 2006 Posts: 464

Oh, so this is why you sent me a private message.

Well, I never said I wasn't sorry that you had to go through such rough times. I only said the poem was terrible. Would you prefer if I had lied?

Also, don't make it sound as if I have or haven't been through this and that. I've had my fair share of bullying as well, ever since I was in Primary School.

W1CKEDJO · Posted: Sun Dec 23, 2007 8:16 am Post subject:

Thank you so much for telling me that my poem was terrible. Well, here's a tip... in the future... if all you're going to do is insult the work of others, keep it to yourself.

Yes, I can tell you were bullied, purely from the fact that you're just as unkind. DON'T take it out on other people.

Sacrament · Advanced User Joined: Aug 15, 2006 Posts: 464

I'm not. I didn't say anything about you or who you are because I don't know you. As far as I know, you are a kind, loving person who I am sure puppies and kittens would love. I was talking about your poem in specific as for what it is: a poem.

As a poem, it is a terrible amalgam of clichés, verse after verse.

dottie · Expert User Joined: Sep 06, 2007 Posts: 522 Location: USA

W1CKEDJO · Posted: Sun Dec 23, 2007 8:45 am Post subject: