Joined: Dec 22, 2007 Posts: 529 Location: California
Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 2:49 am Post subject: Just a stupid poem I wrote
I was really bored and this took me like 15 minutes so I hope it dosen't suck too badly. I can't believe I'm actually posting this, and it's likely I'll get paranoid and take it down. Here it is =/ ::
No Room for conversation
Just mindless contemplation
Of what to say and how to say it
Either way it's all unfit
Inability to look into one's eyes
Creates a world of plastic lies
Expressing emotions in the wrong direction
Only furthers this painful rejection
Always locked inside this isolation
For all communication
Is done through Silent Conversation.
Posted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 3:40 pm Post subject: Re: Just a stupid poem I wrote
Psychedelicious wrote:
I was really bored and this took me like 15 minutes so I hope it dosen't suck too badly. I can't believe I'm actually posting this, and it's likely I'll get paranoid and take it down. Here it is =/ ::
No Room for conversation
Just mindless contemplation
Of what to say and how to say it
Either way it's all unfit
Inability to look into one's eyes
Creates a world of plastic lies
Expressing emotions in the wrong direction
Only furthers this painful rejection
Always locked inside this isolation
For all communication
Is done through Silent Conversation.
bleh
Wow this is really good. Similar to my style in a way. I like that it's short too. You communicate everything in a minimalistic manner. I like it.
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