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kuhtreen
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 29, 2008 12:11 am    Post subject: Poem Reply with quote
Endless noise…too loud
Maybe I’m too silent
I’m looking for someone
Just a stranger to cling to

I’m a dramatic disaster
Alone, I linger
Just an object in a corner
Was never enough

Can only think of yesterday
Don’t care about tomorrow
I am the death of a happy soul
And the misery lives on…
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Misterhopefull
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 29, 2008 11:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Sounds more like a metal song intro than a poem. Poems should look more natural as though written to give insight and delight.

Not gonna knock you though, we all can relate to your words. Thanks for sharing.


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Ericisme
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 03, 2008 3:33 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
I like it!


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