Just a little poem

Scottish_Player · Posted: Wed Jul 06, 2005 9:04 pm Post subject: Just a little poem

Just one of my many little poems,its a little naff but here it is any way

I woke up this morning with a though in my head
About should i leave this world as i would be better off dead
But when i looked out the window and i saw the kids play in the sun
It reminded me of how this world can still be fun

So i got myself ready and went out the door
The world had never seemed this pleasent before?
My sense where hightened i was on a natural high
Like i could almost reach up and toutch the sky

This is all so unreal i thought to myself
Its like i was living the life of someone else Wink

Frozen_In_Time · Posted: Sat Jul 09, 2005 9:55 am Post subject:

That's a really good poem. It flows really well, and has a meaning behind it. Nice job. Smile

Scottish_Player · Posted: Sat Jul 09, 2005 9:37 pm Post subject:

Thanks for the comments Very Happy

here is another one thats a litte cheesy and its a little more personal

ANGELS

Angels are sent from heaven
Sent to help us on our way
To give us guidence in our lives
And help us through the day's

They are there when we need them
And even when we dont
They give us Love, Hope and Happines
What more could we wont

Without and Angel in my life i dont know what i would do
As there is no Angel in this world who is more special than you Wink

FruitLooPs · Posted: Sun Jul 10, 2005 10:42 am Post subject:

Wow, both of those are really good. You certainly have a talent for making poems Scottishplayer. Very Happy

Scottish_Player · Posted: Sun Jul 10, 2005 11:17 am Post subject: