two poems i wrote

Marin · Posted: Sun Jul 17, 2005 7:47 am Post subject: two poems i wrote

Poems have been deleted

GettingThere · Posted: Sun Jul 17, 2005 8:33 am Post subject:

You wear your heart on your sleeve, that's brave. I like your work.

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redlady · Elite User Joined: Jul 08, 2005 Posts: 1958

Hi Marin - You have articulated what i feel myself with your poetry in a way that i never could. Your poetry is beautiful and creative. You are a talent.

Marin · Posted: Mon Jul 18, 2005 3:45 am Post subject:

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redlady · Elite User Joined: Jul 08, 2005 Posts: 1958

Hi Marin it's me again, i don't want to sound cheesy or anything but you're brave for posting such personal expressions of your self, i don't think i could have - so i understand why you want to take them down. I'm glad i got a chance to read them. Good on to you - cheesy or what.

Marin · Posted: Mon Jul 18, 2005 5:45 am Post subject:

OK, apparently once people have responded to your post you can't delete it, only edit. Well thanks you two for calling me brave, I'll try to hold out and not be paranoid, and redlady I didn't think anything you said was cheesy, it made me feel better about posting it.

redlady · Elite User Joined: Jul 08, 2005 Posts: 1958

Cool - cause i normally feel silly about saying stuff like that. I'm glad i could make you feel a bit better.

GettingThere · Posted: Mon Jul 18, 2005 10:11 am Post subject:

All the great artists - poets, song writers and painters - bare their souls to the world. That is what sets them apart and gives real life to their works, the raw emotion.

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Two men look through the same bars, one sees mud the other sees stars.