I was feeling creative :p

toothpastekisses · Posted: Sat May 24, 2008 5:03 pm Post subject: I was feeling creative :p

Mirror Ball Eyes

I see them sometimes, those mirror ball eyes
Making me dizzy, making me sick.
They engulf my soul,
Encapsulate my freedom, my thoughts,
From every dreaded angle.
If only I were not their target
I think I could live in bliss.
But fear not, my friend,
The time will come
When those eyes will bore
Into me no more
So scorn
And terror
And awful feelings
Will pass with sweet sweet time
With audacity healing my being.

Urm I know it's cliche and crap but yeah, it makes sense to me!

Psychedelicious · Posted: Sat May 24, 2008 5:24 pm Post subject:

EDITED**** I'm stupid!!!!!!!!!!! Nice poem Smile

Richey · Expert User Joined: Sep 28, 2005 Posts: 832

its basically saying the grass is greener on the other side, so its uplifting and dark intertwined but not depressing at all, i really enjoyed your poem, very cool!

mustang · Posted: Wed May 28, 2008 4:44 am Post subject:

well done toothpaste! really enjoyed it Smile