write a love letter ...

lyricalliaisons

lyricalliaisons

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mrb said:
yes but this is the thing lol , pretend you are , we all have needs feelings , you say your inexperienced , but inexperienced people fall in love ... just write a letter that gets all those built up feelings out , you want to fall in love we all do :) so write a letter to some imaginary person that you have fallen for ... dont tell me you havent had some crush on a guy over the years , weather some bloke on tv or real ...... go on do it lolzzzzz write your feelings that you would love to say to a guy out ;)..... oi i did it so its your turn :cool:
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Change all the "guy" words to "girl" lol, & you're right. I have had feelings for people lol, but I couldn't write a love letter. I did just sort of write a love poem though lol. It's stupid & very long & very repetitive, but it's something lol. I just wrote it & then realized it sort of fits with this thread, somewhat. I'm embarrassed to post it & I shouldn't lol, especially since it's basically a draft. Hopefully the fact that it's a poem & not a letter doesn't make it disqualified ::p:


I saw you standing there,
with sunlight in your hair
I saw you standing there,
Completely unaware,
That I saw you standing there--
That I was standing there,
Watching you standing there,
With sunlight in your hair

I saw you standing there,
Talking to someone you probably know,
Smiling, and laughing,
face all aglow,
I saw you standing there,
Completely unaware,
That I was standing there,
Watching you standing there,
With sunlight in your hair
Smiling, and laughing,
face all aglow,
Talking to someone you probably know

I saw you standing there,
with sunlight in your hair
But didn't talk to you,
It's just not something I would do
I saw you standing there,
But didn't know what to do,
So I just kept standing there,
Watching you standing there,
with sunlight in your hair,
Completely unaware,
Of who I was or that I was there,
Watching you standing there,
with sunlight in your hair

I saw you standing there,
with sunlight in your hair
Completely unaware,
Of who I was or that I was there,
Watching you standing there,
with sunlight in your hair
Hoping maybe someday you'll glance my way
Maybe someday,
you'll be aware
Of the girl who is standing there,
Watching you standing there,
with sunlight in your hair

Maybe someday,
You'll be aware,
of the girl who is standing there,
The girl who is quiet and awkward and oh, so “shy”
Of the girl who is standing there,
Watching you standing there,
with sunlight in your hair

Maybe you won't glance away
From the girl who is standing there,
Watching you standing there,
with sunlight in your hair
Maybe something will make you stay
Maybe you'll come up to me and say
Something that won't make me run away
Maybe you'll understand why
I saw you standing there,
With sunlight in your hair,
But didn't talk to you
And didn't know what to do
So I just kept standing there,
Watching you standing there,
with sunlight in your hair

I saw you standing there,
with sunlight in your hair
Completely unaware,
Of who I was or that I was there,
Or that I was standing there watching you,
with sunlight in your hair

I saw you standing there,
with sunlight in your hair
Hoping that someday
You'd be aware
Of the girl who is standing there,
Of the girl who is quiet and awkward and oh, so “shy”
Watching you standing there,
with sunlight in your hair
And maybe someday you would glance my way
And maybe you wouldn't glance away
Maybe something would make you stay
Maybe you'd come up to me and say
Something that wouldn't make me run away
Maybe you'd understand why
I saw you standing there,
With sunlight in your hair,
But didn't talk to you
And didn't know what to do
So I just kept standing there,
Watching you standing there,
with sunlight in your hair
 
mrb

mrb

Well-known member
lyricalliaisons said:
Change all the "guy" words to "girl" lol, & you're right. I have had feelings for people lol, but I couldn't write a love letter. I did just sort of write a love poem though lol. It's stupid & very long & very repetitive, but it's something lol. I just wrote it & then realized it sort of fits with this thread, somewhat. I'm embarrassed to post it & I shouldn't lol, especially since it's basically a draft. Hopefully the fact that it's a poem & not a letter doesn't make it disqualified ::p:


I saw you standing there,
with sunlight in your hair
I saw you standing there,
Completely unaware,
That I saw you standing there--
That I was standing there,
Watching you standing there,
With sunlight in your hair

I saw you standing there,
Talking to someone you probably know,
Smiling, and laughing,
face all aglow,
I saw you standing there,
Completely unaware,
That I was standing there,
Watching you standing there,
With sunlight in your hair
Smiling, and laughing,
face all aglow,
Talking to someone you probably know

I saw you standing there,
with sunlight in your hair
But didn't talk to you,
It's just not something I would do
I saw you standing there,
But didn't know what to do,
So I just kept standing there,
Watching you standing there,
with sunlight in your hair,
Completely unaware,
Of who I was or that I was there,
Watching you standing there,
with sunlight in your hair

I saw you standing there,
with sunlight in your hair
Completely unaware,
Of who I was or that I was there,
Watching you standing there,
with sunlight in your hair
Hoping maybe someday you'll glance my way
Maybe someday,
you'll be aware
Of the girl who is standing there,
Watching you standing there,
with sunlight in your hair

Maybe someday,
You'll be aware,
of the girl who is standing there,
The girl who is quiet and awkward and oh, so “shy”
Of the girl who is standing there,
Watching you standing there,
with sunlight in your hair

Maybe you won't glance away
From the girl who is standing there,
Watching you standing there,
with sunlight in your hair
Maybe something will make you stay
Maybe you'll come up to me and say
Something that won't make me run away
Maybe you'll understand why
I saw you standing there,
With sunlight in your hair,
But didn't talk to you
And didn't know what to do
So I just kept standing there,
Watching you standing there,
with sunlight in your hair

I saw you standing there,
with sunlight in your hair
Completely unaware,
Of who I was or that I was there,
Or that I was standing there watching you,
with sunlight in your hair

I saw you standing there,
with sunlight in your hair
Hoping that someday
You'd be aware
Of the girl who is standing there,
Of the girl who is quiet and awkward and oh, so “shy”
Watching you standing there,
with sunlight in your hair
And maybe someday you would glance my way
And maybe you wouldn't glance away
Maybe something would make you stay
Maybe you'd come up to me and say
Something that wouldn't make me run away
Maybe you'd understand why
I saw you standing there,
With sunlight in your hair,
But didn't talk to you
And didn't know what to do
So I just kept standing there,
Watching you standing there,
with sunlight in your hair
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2 things here .. 1 i thought you were a girl must be your avi mate , jesus iv been on here for thousands of years ever since dinosuars roamed the earth so have you and all this time i thought you were a girl :eek: but anyways dont matter does it :confused: hey great poem btw ........ i like it , oh im a guy lol .........post edit ... hey your Statistics say female ..... im confused now , oh unless you like girls but thats ok :) ..... im um making it all worse aint i , gazza shuts up ......... see yaaaaaaaaa .......
 
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Tiercel

Tiercel

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I was originally going to think about all the things I would want to tell the woman with whom I'd want to spend the rest of my life. But further thought led me to write a much more practical letter. So....


Dearest Lady,

I simply cannot stand to think of you, as I am inclined to wish I was much improved.

Someday I may enlighten you as to my feelings toward you, but I cannot foresee that day.
I fear that any effort on my part will only lead to the eventual dissolution of our friendship,
and that is a thought I simply cannot bear.

For now it must suffice to say that without you my world would be a much colder and
darker place.

Always Yours in friendship and trust,
Luke​

Short, honest, and probably the closest I'll ever get to sharing a mutual love for someone special.

;)
 
lyricalliaisons

lyricalliaisons

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mrb said:
2 things here .. 1 i thought you were a girl must be your avi mate , jesus iv been on here for thousands of years ever since dinosuars roamed the earth so have you and all this time i thought you were a girl :eek: but anyways dont matter does it :confused: hey great poem btw ........ i like it , oh im a guy lol .........post edit ... hey your Statistics say female ..... im confused now , oh unless you like girls but thats ok :) ..... im um making it all worse aint i , gazza shuts up ......... see yaaaaaaaaa .......
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Lmao! I AM a girl lol so you were right & so are my statistics, I just happen to like other females ::p:
 
mrb

mrb

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now hers a love letter that would impress a girl :) dear lets say mary , iv just won 30 million on the euro millions lottery :) have i told you i love you , and will you marry me ............. ten seconds later ring ring .... ring ring .... ring ring , click pick up hello whos that :) why its mary of course ill marry you :)
 
Dronee

Dronee

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Hmm... ok... I'll try something that's as close to my own personal real life experience as I can...

***

Hey... remember when you told me that you were on the shelf? That it seemed that no one wanted you? You know... I doubt that was ever true or at least I can't understand it. I think that you're quite a nice person and quite pretty as well. More than that, I think you're quite compassionate and that's a rare trait these days.

Remember that movie you wanted to watch? The Bucket List? Well, if I knew that I didn't have long to live, one of my wishes would be to get to know you better. You look beautiful when you smile and I'd certainly like to see it again and again... And to make you laugh because you seldom seem to do so.

But you've probably found what you're searching for right now and you're probably with someone you love. And that is exactly how it should be because good people deserve some happiness in this world. Yet if for some reason you're still searching... then know that at least one person thinks very well of you. I hope that this thought will cheer you up when you're feeling down.

And hey... maybe if you're still searching, we may search for the way home together..
 
mrb

mrb

Well-known member
Dronee said:
Hmm... ok... I'll try something that's as close to my own personal real life experience as I can...

***

Hey... remember when you told me that you were on the shelf? That it seemed that no one wanted you? You know... I doubt that was ever true or at least I can't understand it. I think that you're quite a nice person and quite pretty as well. More than that, I think you're quite compassionate and that's a rare trait these days.

Remember that movie you wanted to watch? The Bucket List? Well, if I knew that I didn't have long to live, one of my wishes would be to get to know you better. You look beautiful when you smile and I'd certainly like to see it again and again... And to make you laugh because you seldom seem to do so.

But you've probably found what you're searching for right now and you're probably with someone you love. And that is exactly how it should be because good people deserve some happiness in this world. Yet if for some reason you're still searching... then know that at least one person thinks very well of you. I hope that this thought will cheer you up when you're feeling down.

And hey... maybe if you're still searching, we may search for the way home together..
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not bad but my 30 millions letter is better ;) she would rather go with me , err nothing to do with the money of course :rolleyes:
 
Dronee

Dronee

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mrb said:
not bad but my 30 millions letter is better ;) she would rather go with me , err nothing to do with the money of course :rolleyes:
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She's attached I think... But I've tried painting her from memory mostly...
It's a draft but I'm too lazy to finish it.. or more like not inspired enough.

Edit: Hmm... incomplete. She looks better I think.
 
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BlackPuma

BlackPuma

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This letter is directed at someone very much real. No one here though, someone from another site. But seeing as me, and her are both in relationships, she is off limits. :C

Ah well, here goes:

- - -

Dear, friend.


First I feel inclined to apologize. Apologize for the confusion this atone of affection might cause. But please, read and know, it is written with the best of intentions. From the very first day we met, your sharp humor and insightful perception on the world around you has never ceased to amaze me. So strong, warm and affectionate. You are as smart, as you are funny.

I won't patronize you by complimenting your appearance, or by saying that I love you.. Because you deserve far more then that. Far more then just those empty, meaningless words. Because when I listen to you, I shortly avert from my reasoning, and shortly believe in the existence of a God. For you are truly a divine angel, with more love to give, then any person deserves to receive. You are too good for this world. And so, you are too good for me. I will not put you in the position in which you will have to choice between your current love, and me. As such you do not deserve.

I wish I could prove my love to you, make you happy every day. If that were to be, then the existence of a heaven would be forever more confirmed. But if you find happiness with someone else, I will be nothing but glad for you. I am happy to know you, and honored to be your friend. And even though you will never feel the same for me, as I do for you, just know how special you are.

For the sake of everything good in this world, please, never change.


Yours truly, a humble friend.
 
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mrb

mrb

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blackpuma said:
This letter is directed at someone very much real. No one here though, someone from another site. But seeing as me, and her are both in relationships, she is off limits. :C

Ah well, here goes:



Dear, friend.


First I feel inclined to apologize. Apologize for the confusion this atone of affection might cause. But please, read and know, it is written with the best of intentions. From the very first day we met, your sharp humor and insightful perception on the world around you has never ceased to amaze me. So strong, warm and affectionate. You are as smart, as you are funny.

I won't patronize you by complimenting your appearance, or by saying that I love you.. Because you deserve far more then that. Far more then just those empty, meaningless words. Because when I listen to you, I shortly avert from my reasoning, and shortly believe in the existence of a God. For you are truly a divine angel, with more love to give, then any person deserves to receive. You are too good for this world. And so, you are too good for me. I will not put you in the position in which you will have to choice between your current love, and me. As such you do not deserve.

I wish I could prove my love to you, make you happy every day. If that were to be, then the existence of a heaven would be forever more confirmed. But if you find happiness with someone else, I will be nothing but glad for you. I am happy to know you, and honored to be your friend. And even though you will never feel the same for me, as I do for you, just know how special you are.

For the sake of everything good in this world, please, never change.


Yours truly, a humble friend.
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that was rather touching :) i liked it ;)
 
mrb

mrb

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illuminationSP said:
Ah, but is she... ::p:
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well if you dont write her a love letter you will never know will you ::p: hey mate whats the worst that can happen , you get rejected like a bent coin in a fruit machine :confused: thats life , im sure she will let you down gently lolz
 
C

chained

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Dear John Doe ( i am not in love)

I was used to the wind moving my hair from my face, I was used to walking fast, until u changed my paste, I was used to fine perfumes until u rolled me down in clear cut grass, I knew how to swim, u taught me how to not drown. U were my Beauty, I was your Beast..

I rly wasn't inspired, but i was bored so what the hell ::p:
 
mrb

mrb

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chained said:
Dear John Doe ( i am not in love)

I was used to the wind moving my hair from my face, I was used to walking fast, until u changed my paste, I was used to fine perfumes until u rolled me down in clear cut grass, I knew how to swim, u taught me how to not drown. U were my Beauty, I was your Beast..

I rly wasn't inspired, but i was bored so what the hell ::p:
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such lovely words ::eek:: again i was deeply touched ;)
 
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